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I Probably Shouldn’t Say Thisby Larry Clifton
Short Fiction
July 2, 2026

A wilderness story

The Bear
in the Screen

Doug loved to hike—the further into a wood the better, far away from the grit of city streets.

Doug Mercer had reached the age where most people who cared expected him to be careful, which irritated him almost as much as being called “spry.”

He was seventy-five, not antique. His knees complained in the morning, his back argued after yard work, and his son Mark had started saying things like Maybe you shouldn’t go out there alone anymore, as if Doug had become a houseplant with a driver’s license.

But Doug still had his truck, a red Chevy with just enough scratches to prove it had lived an honest life. He had his drone, a little gray miracle that nested in an old lunch box he had modified.

Doug loved to hike, the further into a wood the better, far away from the grit of city streets. He was at home out there when his drone rose into the sky and peered down at the forest through its 3-axis camera. The trails asked nothing from him except his attention.

That was more than he could say for the world.

On a bright, hard Florida morning, Doug drove down an old service road south of the powerline cut, where the pavement had given up years ago and sand filled the cracks like old bones. Palmettos crowded both sides. Cabbage palms leaned over the road. Pine needles whispered against the windshield whenever the breeze moved.

His phone chimed just as the truck bounced over a rut.

Mark.

Doug let it ring twice, then thumbed the button on the steering wheel.

“Morning, son.”

“Where are you?”

Doug glanced at the trees sliding past. “Church.”

There was a pause. “You haven’t been to church since my wedding.”

“I’m communing with nature.”

“You’re flying the drone alone again.”

“Creation looks better in 4K.”

Mark sighed. Doug could picture him standing in his driveway with a coffee mug in one hand, already dressed for work, jaw tight the way it got when worry turned into aggravation.

“Dad, I’m serious. At least tell me where you are.”

Doug smiled, though not unkindly. Mark worried because Mark loved him. Doug knew that. But love could start sounding like a fence if a man wasn’t careful.

“I’m off the old logging road. Same place as last month.”

“That doesn’t narrow it down.”

“It does if you pay attention when I talk.”

“Dad.”

“I’ll send you a pin when I park.”

“You said that last time.”

“I meant to last time.”

Mark exhaled into the phone. “Just don’t do anything dumb.”

Doug looked at the drone case on the passenger seat.

“Now why would I start living like that this late?”

He ended the call before Mark could answer.

The clearing appeared half a mile later, a sandy open place where the road widened near a creek. The woods there had a lonely beauty Doug trusted. No houses. No barking dogs. No lawn crews. Just scrub oak, pine, palmetto, and the low, steady murmur of water moving over limestone.

He parked the truck beneath a crooked oak and stepped out into the heat.

The air smelled of pine sap, damp leaves, and warm sand. A hawk circled high above the trees. Somewhere beyond the creek, a woodpecker hammered away like a tiny carpenter with a grudge.

Doug lowered the tailgate and opened the drone case.

The machine inside looked too delicate for the wilderness, all folded arms and little black eyes. He bought it after losing his first one in a river. He guessed drones would keep him busy.

That part had worked.

The drone gave Doug something he hadn’t realized he missed: the feeling of being new at something. At his age, people expected him to tell stories about what he used to know. The drone forced him to learn. Batteries. Satellites. Return-to-home settings. Wind warnings. Camera angles. Editing software that seemed designed by people who hated retirees.

He loved all of it.

Within minutes, the drone lifted from the sand, dust stirring beneath its tiny rotors. Doug watched it rise above the truck, above the oak, above the palmettos, until the world on his phone screen opened wide beneath him.

The red truck became a toy.

The service road became a pale scar.

The creek flashed silver through green.

Doug breathed easier.

From above, age did not matter. Bills did not matter. The doctor’s careful voice did not matter. Even loneliness lost its shape. The drone carried his eyes over the trees, and for a little while Doug felt weightless.

He followed the creek east, keeping the drone high. A deer burst from cover below, white tail flashing. Doug laughed and tilted the camera, tracking it until it vanished into shade.

“Got you,” he said.

He flew farther than usual, past the bend in the creek and over a darker patch of woods he had never explored on foot. The trees grew closer there, their crowns tight together. Beyond them lay a sandy break, half hidden by palmettos and a fallen oak.

That was where Doug saw the bear.

At first, the size made no sense.

Florida black bears were usually shy, moving shadows, glimpsed and gone. This one stood in the clearing like something from an older world. It was huge through the shoulders, dark fur shining where sunlight touched it, head lowered near the fallen tree. One ear was ragged. Pale scars crossed its muzzle.

Doug leaned closer to the screen.

“Well, I’ll be.”

The bear lifted its head.

Even through the camera, Doug felt the force of that stare. It looked straight at the drone.

He eased the drone higher.

The bear rose onto its hind legs.

The sight stole his breath. Standing, the animal looked impossible. Not a bear so much as a wall of muscle and fur. Doug had heard fishermen exaggerate, hunters stretch the truth until it squealed, but if anyone had told him there was a seven-hundred-pound bear in those woods, he would have laughed.

He was not laughing now.

“Easy,” he whispered, though the bear could not hear him.

Or maybe it could.

The bear dropped to all fours. Its head swung toward the sound of the drone. Then, in one shocking burst, it disappeared into the trees.

Not away from him.

Toward him.

Doug looked up from the screen.

The woods were suddenly too quiet.

He pulled the drone back fast. On the screen, the creek jerked beneath the camera. The palmettos blurred. His red truck appeared in the distance, sun flashing off the hood.

Then something roared. Not the roar from a movie. It was deeper, rougher, full of breath and rage.

The palmettos across the clearing exploded.

The bear came out low and fast, throwing sand and broken fronds behind it. Doug had one clear thought before it reached him.

No animal that big should move that fast.

The drone controller flew from his hands when the bear hit him.

Doug slammed backward into the truck’s front fender. Pain burst through his shoulder. Hot musk filled his nose. The bear’s mouth opened inches from his face, teeth yellow-white, breath sour with berries and meat and earth.

Doug yelled something and drove both forearms upward.

The bear’s weight crushed him against the truck and a claw raked across his left side. His shirt and skin tore. Doug staggered sideways, struck the grille, and dropped to one knee.

The bear swiped again, missing his face by inches and shattering the truck’s headlight.

That offended Doug in some ridiculous corner of his mind.

“You bas--”

The bear roared over him.

Doug rolled beneath the front bumper.

He had never moved so fast in his life. Sand burned his elbows. Gravel gouged his palms and his ribs gouged his chest. He dragged himself under the truck as the bear lunged again, claws scraping the ground where his legs had been.

The Chevy rocked when the bear slammed into it.

Doug flattened himself beneath the undercarriage, cheek pressed into hot sand, oil and dust above him, death moving around him in circles.

A paw swept under the truck.

Doug yanked his boots back.

Claws cut grooves in the sand inches from his feet.

The bear huffed, snorted, shoved its muzzle low beside the running board. One dark eye appeared, wet and furious. Doug could hear it smelling him.

His phone, back pocket – of course.

Doug twisted, nearly blacked out, but forced a hand behind him. Blood made his fingers slick. The truck rocked again. The bear dragged its claws along the passenger door with a sound like a can opener on a battleship.

Doug got the phone - the screen was cracked, but lit.

No signal.

“Come on,” he whispered.

A bar appeared, and he tapped Mark’s name.

The call failed.

The bear struck the truck again.

Doug tried a second time.

Mark answered. “Dad?”

“Bear.”

“What?”

“Bear. Big one. I’m under the truck.”

A beat of silence.

“Tell me this is one of your jokes.”

“I’m hurt, bear, not joking.”

Mark’s voice changed instantly. The son disappeared. The man took over.

“Where are you?”

Doug gave directions in pieces, fighting for breath. Old service road. South of the powerline cut. Clearing by the creek. Red truck. Bear.

“Stay on the phone,” Mark said. “I’m coming.”

“Bring something persuasive.”

“Dad, listen to me. Don’t move.”

Doug laughed once, and pain punished him for it.

“I can do that.”

For the next twenty minutes, Doug lived beneath his truck.

Sometimes the bear vanished into the brush, and Doug dared to hope. Then the huffing returned. Once, it stood beside the truck so close he could see one huge paw planted in the sand. The claws were black and curved and long as pocketknives.

The drone hovered somewhere overhead, forgotten and beeping a battery warning from the fallen controller.

The bear turned toward the sound.

Doug heard it move away from the truck, then stop.

A low moan came from the woods.

Not from the big bear.

Something smaller.

The giant bear gave one final roar, then crashed back through the palmettos toward the creek.

When Mark’s pickup slid into the clearing ten minutes later, the bear was gone.

Mark jumped out with a pistol in one hand and terror on his face.

“Dad!”

“Under here,” Doug called weakly.

Mark dropped to his knees. The look on his face frightened Doug more than the bear had.

“That bad?” Doug asked.

“Holy shit old man, you’re bleeding bad.”

“But I won.”

“You did not win.”

“I’m alive.”

Mark pressed a towel against his side and half dragged, half carried him into the passenger seat. Doug tried not to groan, did, and told Mark it was his truck’s bad shocks.

As they bounced out of the woods, Doug looked back through the dusty rear window.

The palmettos had closed behind the bear.

But he felt watched.

At the hospital, Doug received stitches, scans, antibiotics, and a lecture from a doctor young enough to be his grandson before Mark delivered a second lecture louder and with angst.

“No more flying alone,” Mark said.

Doug lay in the hospital bed, bandaged from shoulder to hip. “Agreed.”

Mark stopped pacing. “You mean that?”

“I said it.”

“You say lots of stuff.”

Doug looked at him then. Really looked. Mark’s eyes were red. His shirt had Doug’s blood on it. He had aged ten years in one afternoon.

He would never give way an inch of independence, but he realized his life reached his son’s life. That’s just the way it was.

“I know I scared you,” Doug said.

Mark’s jaw tightened.

“Hell, yes you scared me.”

Doug nodded slowly. “I’m sorry about that, son.”

Mark knew that ended the lecture.

Three days later, Mark drove his father’s repaired Chevy pickup to Doug’s house. He handed him the memory card from the drone’s controller.

“I don’t think you should watch it,” Mark said.

“So you watched it first.”

“Of course I watched it first.”

“And?”

Mark sat across from him at the kitchen table. “There’s something you need to see.”

They played the footage on Doug’s laptop.

Doug watched the drone rise, follow the creek, find the clearing. There was the bear. The fallen oak. The huge dark shape standing guard.

Mark paused the video.

“Look here.”

At first Doug saw only grass and shadow. Then something moved beside the fallen tree.

A cub.

Small, black, frantic.

Its hind leg was caught in a cable snare. The wire had twisted around a root, pinning it near the oak. The big bear stood over it, helpless and enraged.

Then the drone moved closer.

The bear looked up.

Doug sat very still.

“She thought I was after the cub,” he said.

Mark said nothing.

Doug watched the screen until his eyes blurred.

Four days later, they returned with a wildlife officer named Perez.

Perez was calm in the way of people who had seen enough trouble not to waste energy announcing it. He carried a rifle with tranquilizer darts. Mark carried his pistol. Doug carried bolt cutters, though everyone had told him not to carry anything heavier than his guilt.

They found the fallen oak.

The snare was still there, twisted open.

No cub. No bear.

Blood marked the grass in small dark flecks.

Perez crouched over the tracks near the creek. “Cub got loose. Limping, but alive when it left.”

Doug closed his eyes. “Good.”

Perez removed the snare and bagged it. “Illegal trap. We’ll file it.”

That should have been the end of it.

It was not.

Doug returned the following week. Then again the week after that. He parked farther away and walked quietly. Doug did not fly the drone. He did not call out. He did not pretend the woods owed him forgiveness.

On the fourth visit, he left three apples on a flat stump near the road.

Mark, with him this time, stared at his father. “You are feeding the bear that tried to kill you.”

“I’m apologizing.”

“That distinction may be lost on the bear.”

The next time they came, the apples were gone.

So Doug brought pears.

The pears disappeared too.

Weeks passed. His wounds healed into pale ridges. Mark’s anger at the bear softened into watchfulness. They still argued, but now Doug sent location pins without being asked. Sometimes Mark came along. Sometimes he sat on Doug’s porch afterward and drank coffee, and they talked about small things until the larger things stopped pressing so hard.

In early autumn, Doug saw the cub.

It stood at the edge of the palmettos, thinner than it should have been but alive. One hind leg dragged slightly. It looked at Doug with bright black eyes, snatched a pear, and vanished.

Doug pondered it all from the tailgate of his truck for a long time.

A week later, the big bear appeared.

Doug had just placed fruit on the stump when the woods went silent. The insects quieted. The birds stopped. Even the breeze seemed to hold itself still.

She stepped from the trees.

The scars on her muzzle were plain in the afternoon light. The ragged ear twitched once. She was still enormous, still wild, still fully capable of ending him if she chose.

Doug kept his hands open and low.

“I know,” he said softly. “You were protecting your own.”

The bear huffed.

“Yes,” Doug said. “That’s fair.”

Then the cub appeared behind her, looking stronger now, still favoring the leg but not so much.

Doug nodded toward the fruit. “That’s for the little one.”

The bear watched him.

The cub limped forward, seized a pear, and scrambled back. The mother did not move. Her dark eyes remained on Doug.

He felt then what he had not felt during the attack. Not rage. Not hatred.

Fear.

Hers and his.

Two creatures, both old enough to understand pain, both trying in their own way to protect what they loved.

Doug raised one hand slowly. Not a wave. Not a claim.

A surrender.

The bear lowered her head.

Then she turned and nudged her cub toward the trees.

After that, Doug returned often.

He never touched them. Never came close. Never forgot what she was. A friend, he learned, did not always mean something you could pet or name. Sometimes friendship was distance respected, silence understood, and the careful keeping of peace.

Sometimes he flew the drone high above the clearing, far enough away that its buzz became part of the sky. The bear would look up, remember perhaps, and then return to the business of living.

By winter, the cub’s limp was almost gone.

One cool afternoon, Mark came with him. They stood beside the red truck while the bear and cub moved along the creek bank thirty yards away. The light was low and gold. The woods smelled of damp earth and pine.

Mark shook his head. “You made friends with the bear that nearly killed you.”

Doug watched the great animal lift her nose to the wind.

“We had a misunderstanding.”

“That’s hugely understated, Dad. Hugely.”

Doug smiled.

The bear looked toward them.

For one long moment, man and beast held each other’s gaze across the clearing. Then the bear blinked, slow and calm, and turned back to the trees.

The cub followed.

They calmly, quietly, disappeared into the palmettos.

Doug stood beside his truck until the woods settled around him again.

“You ready?” Mark asked.

“In a minute.”

His son waited.

Doug looked at the empty place where the bear had been. From the drone’s eye, the world was roads and trees and water, simple lines on a screen. But down here, where blood dried in the sand and mercy took its time, the world was stranger and harder and better.

He rested one hand on the dented fender of his truck.

“See you next week,” he said.

And somewhere beyond the creek, something large moved softly through the green.

Copyright © 2026 Larry D. Clifton. All rights reserved.

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